Broken Wings

That's the exact same thing my friend said! Thank you =^-^=

She could feel water drop onto her face, and she opened her eyes to see where it came from. It came from the tree she was laying under. It was ...

This almost made me want to cry, which, for 1 AM in the morning, is pretty dang good. It is extremely emotional, sweet, and the whole meaning behind it is ...

Haha, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it! --Wings

Chapter One [part one]— The shadows flickered around me, and the cold seemed to go right through my clothes. I wrapped the old blanket tighter around me (though it made ...

Generally, I agree with the two above comment, lol J Quote: I had never been good about standing in front of a crowd, and even though there were only seven ...

...I'm not really twelve. I mess around with my age when I have nothing better to do, and at the time I must've felt like being twelve. I don't like ...

I'm taking a break from Red Skies ((which I'm considering putting some more chapters up, I've got a lot done)) and decided to work with an idea I've been harvesting ...

Well, getting back to the poem... It does sound a bit like the attention to rhythm is overpowering the language itself. With that attention to rhythm, it's a little disappointing ...

No, I wasn't planning on coloring her in, but my character has black hair ^-^; And the cloth around her hip does need something else, thanks for pointing that out ...

It wasn't rally supposed to be focused on anything specific. Basically the fact that ((forgive this emo-ness, it has nothing to do with my feelings, it's just there)) life is ...

Thank you xD; Yes, it is a tad bit dark, isn't it? I love your signature by the way >.> It made me laugh for a good two minutes or ...

I wanted to try free verse...I haven't done it in a while. Kind of a random emo-ish poem but...I hope you like it! No matter how many times I lick ...

Kinda creepy in a ring sorta way "In a ring sorta way?" xD; Sure...I'll take that.... whatever it means

I'm with Imp on this one...and spellcheck your stuff too, some things are misspelled. And there are a couple typos. Please review your work before you post it here. It ...